well done , this second poster is getting clearer and you have started to use it to put your thoughts down. Work on the Problems and Solutions section and expand on what you need to do next to produce three dimensional pieces. Include some ideas on where your jewellery could be sited on the body, be adventurous – remember the work is taking reference from Lao Tzu his philosophical reflections on water – so what does that mean to you? The drawings are beautiful and I strongly encourage you to do more at a larger scale with more detail. Please re read everything you have written, is there anything you can change or explain more clearly? Do add the names of the artists you are looking at and please add a comment in the reflection section. You do not have to redesign another poster – work into this one.
well done , this second poster is getting clearer and you have started to use it to put your thoughts down. Work on the Problems and Solutions section and expand on what you need to do next to produce three dimensional pieces. Include some ideas on where your jewellery could be sited on the body, be adventurous – remember the work is taking reference from Lao Tzu his philosophical reflections on water – so what does that mean to you? The drawings are beautiful and I strongly encourage you to do more at a larger scale with more detail. Please re read everything you have written, is there anything you can change or explain more clearly? Do add the names of the artists you are looking at and please add a comment in the reflection section. You do not have to redesign another poster – work into this one.