After looking at the video, it comes across to slow and can loose the interest of the viewer easily. There for i need to go back and review my clips to create a faster pace video. Something Chris also pointed out was my captions being to commercial like however this video is created to go along side my album proposal for him so i aim for it to come across as a commercial piece. I will work on the captions being more personal however i do not want to footage to look like a vlog of my holiday i want it to still show Ten as an artist.

Ideas for captions.

• London > Korean
• Korea > London
• 5,000 Miles
• Billions of hearts captured
• Smiles shared
• The star from 3 groups
• Moment to shine
• Dreams coming true
• Voices lost
• Friendships created
• Love
• Adrenaline rush
• Music transcends language
• Moments of pure joy
• Confidence
• Power
• Determination
• Culture
• Endless photos saved
• Treasured collection of albums