feedback

The Feedback that I have gathered through my peers and tutors that have viewed my project so far :

WWW .

• • good layout and colours of my sketchbook
  • nice format
  • lots of pictures
  • descriptive artist research
  • good photos.

EBI .

• • more descriptive in parts
  • bigger writing
  • too much white space in sketchbook.
  • more experimentation within photography.