In this storyboard I tried to make my journey more concise as I think the layout I created previously would be an unrealistic amount of work. After my crit I realised that I need to make the process of the jellyfish regenerating more clear for the viewer, so I put a bigger focus on that in this storyboard and I think I have been successful.

In the crit yesterday it was mentioned that my style has become much more cartoon-like recently and strayed away from the styles I was experimenting with previously, which I think were very successful. Moving forward in the project I want to experiment with portraying different emotions, making sure that I incorporate the painterly style I used earlier in the project. I’m interested in looking at Betsy Walton’s work, because she uses very vibrant colours, and portrays her characters in an abstract style.