Good understanding of the piece and of the task. Please spellcheck your essay and re-read it so that you check the syntax of your sentences. Check the grammar (it is vs its).Also when you make a statement make sure it is supported: find references (from the web and/or form Jstor and make sure you reference them according to the student handbook). For this module students should use Harvard referencing style.
Here are a few points:
“The artist came up with the idea” name the artist
“The scuplture” spelling
“As well as being a distraction from current events, it can also be a representation” metaphor would be a better word
“Another representaion interpretation given in the Guardian article (2020)” interpretation would be ba better word than ‘representation’
“Intercultural dimensions are normalised and welcomed” vague, rewrite sentence explaining in relation to modern art acceptance.
“the shortness of it’s stay” its (grammar)
Good understanding of the piece and of the task. Please spellcheck your essay and re-read it so that you check the syntax of your sentences. Check the grammar (it is vs its).Also when you make a statement make sure it is supported: find references (from the web and/or form Jstor and make sure you reference them according to the student handbook). For this module students should use Harvard referencing style.
Here are a few points:
“The artist came up with the idea” name the artist
“The scuplture” spelling
“As well as being a distraction from current events, it can also be a representation” metaphor would be a better word
“Another representaion interpretation given in the Guardian article (2020)” interpretation would be ba better word than ‘representation’
“Intercultural dimensions are normalised and welcomed” vague, rewrite sentence explaining in relation to modern art acceptance.
“the shortness of it’s stay” its (grammar)