Project 8 Reflect on my ‘Comfortable’ work

These are the works I have done for my friend earlier today.

Let me lists few things that I need to change here…

1. The ‘comfortable’ drawing style is not improving my skill.
2. There is a story but not clear.
3. Simple and plain characters.
4. The audience might not look at it twice.

After writing these weaknesses above, I guess I need to create a strong foundation…

HOW TO DRAW A NORMAL HUMAN??!!

I guess yes, this is gonna be my theme this holiday, starting to practice the features until I get rid of my manga style.