Sample magazine spread layout

Last week we had our final tutorials for FMP, I wanted to be prepared for this tutorial to ensure I can move forward into the final stages of my project. With time against me, I decided to layout a magazine spread which I intent to use for my final outcome. I wasn’t able to layout the whole final magazine as I am still waiting on some disposable cameras to be returned. I put together a spread for my narrative finding joy. This is clearly shown in my sketchbook. Before commiting my time to producing the full magazine I wanted to get feedback on this sample spread. My tutor gave me great feedback, saying what went well, which was the image layout but also told me to reconsider my typography. Typography was distorted and we thought it may be going too extreme and may complement the visuals more if it was plainer. Moving forward I will be experementing with this paired back layout to ensure my final piece is consice.