The poster has changed from the last edition in the use of images and you are refining it to reveal exactly what you are focusing on both visually and through research. In the ‘What is new’ section you write about making with wood in comparison with precious metals – a value perception – but wood also has an interesting relationship with water that is very different from metal. It may be useful for you to consider this and write about your thoughts. In ‘materials and techniques’ you could photograph one or two examples of tests of models you are making to clarify what you mean by wavy shapes. Keep drawing at a large scale and do refer to Ma Yuan – he should now become a partner in your studies.
The poster has changed from the last edition in the use of images and you are refining it to reveal exactly what you are focusing on both visually and through research. In the ‘What is new’ section you write about making with wood in comparison with precious metals – a value perception – but wood also has an interesting relationship with water that is very different from metal. It may be useful for you to consider this and write about your thoughts. In ‘materials and techniques’ you could photograph one or two examples of tests of models you are making to clarify what you mean by wavy shapes. Keep drawing at a large scale and do refer to Ma Yuan – he should now become a partner in your studies.