since the crit i have made amendments to all three of my spreads. the most drastic changes i have made are adding coloured blocks as part of the background, this shape was taken from a graffiti removal splodge i photographed. i have also taken the advice of one of my tutors and used hand rendered type for the sub heading on all of my spreads.

other amendments are: making the folios smaller, changing the colour of the titles from black so they don’t jump forward too much, widening the columns to improve readability, adding a jump quote from the main article, getting rid of small images that you cannot see clearly, adding tabs instead of white spaces and tweaking my kerning.