Are you not sure how to improve your written English?
Native English speakers
In advance of submitting your next written assignment you would do well to seek help. There is excellent advice in the Academic Study Kit – http://blogs.brighton.ac.uk/askbusinessschool/ or, alternatively, you could look for fabulous guidance from the Academic Phrasebank – http://www.phrasebank.manchester.ac.uk/.
English as a second language
You are able to seek help from the Advanced Business English Tutor. They will be able to give you feedback on how better to frame your analysis and ensure you are writing correctly. Remember that formal, academic English can be a challenge, even for home students, so ensuring that you make the best use of the resources available to you will help improve your writing. To book an appointment go to: https://bit.ly/2xDsy9m