It reads very well and you have established a good graphic structure to build into as your work develops. The images are very appropriate but could have slipped one of your pieces in too? I can see images of maquettes in the ‘Methods’ and the actual definition becoming more defined as the project progresses. The same is true of the ‘Material and Technical’ section – perhaps a few sequential thumbnail images. Are you aware of anyone else dealing with Mr Willets biography in this way? Are there any examples of other artists portraying biography through making? In terms of information, everything is there and it looks good – well done.
June 23, 2017 at 5:59 am
It reads very well and you have established a good graphic structure to build into as your work develops. The images are very appropriate but could have slipped one of your pieces in too? I can see images of maquettes in the ‘Methods’ and the actual definition becoming more defined as the project progresses. The same is true of the ‘Material and Technical’ section – perhaps a few sequential thumbnail images. Are you aware of anyone else dealing with Mr Willets biography in this way? Are there any examples of other artists portraying biography through making? In terms of information, everything is there and it looks good – well done.
June 23, 2017 at 1:02 pm
Thanks Patrick, I’ll aim to cover these points as my work develops
June 23, 2017 at 12:49 pm
A great poster. I’ll be interested in your findings.
June 23, 2017 at 12:58 pm
I will be updating my Research Poster regularly during the course of my work. Thank you for your comment Nina